She sat by the window sill, decked in her best clothes. Looking at the passer’s by, enticing them with her absent smile.
Wondering about the melancholic smile that hauntingly reminded them of something vague, they flitted by her window,but didn’t stop.
It was one of those days.She would stalk the streets or go hungry tonight.
Catawampus me! 
classic!!!!!
Me: 🙂
perfecto !!
Me: thank you dearie!
Sad no!!
Me : I know .. but well.. it happens no?
“Only she knows how it feels – and the many hes and shes like her – and in that shattered hopelessness Life’s adamancy not to fade away speaks still a solid irony!” Sorry for that persona indulgence… been there… too often for my liking!
Me: I know! I know! Esp in the mood that you are in 🙂
This was excellent !! Short, crisp and to the point..
Me: Thank you babes!
Crisp and sad! Very well written!!
Me: Thank you dearie 🙂
nicely written..
Me: Thank you 🙂
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Me: 😐
😦 tooo
Me: 😐 😐
oh sad 😦 but true 😦
Me: Very 😦
winnie, there r certain words in prose or poetry that make u linger around them for a while, till u move on n read
“absent smile”
so many layers to those 2 words u wrote….
lovely. morbid…like life itself.
Me: I have said before too.. somewhere.. that a writeup is not so special unless it makes other think or feel strongly.. I am glad this could do that to you 🙂
your write up is definitely special winnie. it makes the reader think and feel the emotion..
Me: Danke! I end up thinking this while i was contemplating writing an email to someone 😉
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brutal and ugly no?but true :(`
ME: yes 😦
Beautifully written Winnie..need I say that? 🙂
yes? 🙂 okay 🙂
Me: Ofcourse you should.. as many times as you like 😉
nice one Winnie 🙂
Me: Thank you dear 🙂
*Claps*
Me: 🙂
things that we see only in our country ..
on second thoughts.. all the poor countries..
on third thoughts.. everywhere
Me: I know 😦
Nice, enough of suspense till the end, and sweet still!
Me: Thank you 🙂
Good Stuff!!!
Me 🙂
sad but true and so perfectly executed by u in just 55words. it was a perfect 55fiction. 🙂
Me: Thank you babes!
nice and sweet 🙂
love the theme and in between I’m really jealous abt U….how can u write such good fictions 🙂 …..fabulous
ME: I have too much time on me.. you should try velapanti for few days! 😀
very beautiful scene should I say..profound!!
ME: Thank you dear!
Poor thing. Sad!! 😦
Me: I know 😦
Hmmm…very nice but sad :(. Liked it 🙂
Me: thank you 🙂
That was very good. Splendid! 🙂
-I
Me: Hey buddy! Long time no see! Just dropped by to your blog now.. you definitely should post more often!
Very nice. Kind of mysterious. I’m not totally certain. And that is life. Well done.
Me: Thank you for dropping by dear 🙂
such a beauty poohi..and so sad! 😦
Me: I know! Life can be sad sometimes
sad tale, but great writing..
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