If only!

Had you waited, turned back, just one time, you would have known. I retrieved that ball of crushed paper after you turned your back.

Tears flowed unretrainedly, as I read through. You crushed my heart with them. And yours too.

If only I could convince you how sorely mistaken you were. If only you believed!


If only she had known that her mom waited till she left to fondle that scrap of paper. She had poured her heart in it only to be rudely overlooked.

Had she known, her mom feared her grandma as she did, she would have crushed her in a bear hug.

For now, she drowned herself in tears.

Prompted at : Carry on tuesday


20 thoughts on “If only!

  1. Wow…love them though these two are heart breakingly sad… maybe just maybe, he did come back and see the mother pick the crushed paper ball, she had snatched from her, she dropped it in the study table drawer, he stopped long enough to see her retrieve it the moment her mother turned her back, he saw her reread it tearfully, and she looked up just in time to find him there… if only Winnie the Poohi had continued the story πŸ™‚

    (Hey not sure I understood, yet couldn’t resist this long comment)

    Me: Ah IHM .. thats just what was running in my mind.. when i wrote this! I wanted to write the other side of the story too! May be I will do just that πŸ˜€

  2. 😦 You instill so much pain. Good ones but sad.

    [Love..LOVE your new header and also the shade of Blue you chose]

    Me: Thank you dear! You are the only one who commented on it! I was waiting for sometime for someone to notice πŸ˜€

  3. If only I was as good with 55s as you! Why sad? Now I ask … πŸ™‚

    Me: :O How can you say that! You are way way better than me.. sad.,.. coz its easy πŸ˜€

    1. hi meena. my grandmom is in icu so not at all feeling like updating. i may update soon.

      hugs πŸ™‚

      ME: Oh thats sad! Hope your Grandmom recovers soon Take care of her! *hugs*

  4. hey u sounds like ’55’ guru …nyways nice πŸ™‚

    ME: Thats IHM πŸ™‚ I simply love to write them πŸ™‚

Humor me please? *winks*

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